tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18494089.post116536479381846686..comments2023-10-31T08:31:28.146-07:00Comments on perhapablog... and other ramblings: brian's story--"down in the dump" part 2toddhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08790040260895274851noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18494089.post-1165473302006513942006-12-06T22:35:00.000-08:002006-12-06T22:35:00.000-08:00Great stuff, Brian!Great stuff, Brian!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18494089.post-1165463060114162912006-12-06T19:44:00.000-08:002006-12-06T19:44:00.000-08:00Thanks guys, I had a great time writing it and I'm...Thanks guys, I had a great time writing it and I'm glad you're enjoying it. Let me know what you think of the ending.<BR/><BR/>Brian.Brianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15896853636391031482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18494089.post-1165434109016523952006-12-06T11:41:00.000-08:002006-12-06T11:41:00.000-08:00Brian,I love the second part. The story is buildi...Brian,<BR/><BR/>I love the second part. The story is building nicely. The indian village is a cool twist. I can't wait to see how everything ties in together.<BR/><BR/>I really liked the moment with MG and Big, when Big thinks MG is calling him out for his comment, but he was really talking about a different noice. Nicely done.<BR/><BR/>Now, bring on part 3.<BR/><BR/>SCOTTScott Weinsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10358635751902092335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18494089.post-1165368705427088952006-12-05T17:31:00.000-08:002006-12-05T17:31:00.000-08:00On on the edge of my seat!!! Part 3 can't come so...On on the edge of my seat!!! Part 3 can't come soon enough for me.<BR/><BR/>Great job, Brian.<BR/><BR/>- BillBill Nolanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15933729451233100419noreply@blogger.com